Free Kindle... should have been a clue.
Actually, first 1/4 not bad at all, descriptive and encouraging.
The next part may have been written by a different author. Run on sentences, poor punctuation; inappropriate use of semi-colons. Choppy. Not descriptive. Boring. OK, maybe acceptable at first for first time author, but it kept going from bad to worse.
Would have continued but thanks to Goodreaders, knew not to waste my time.